I need help.
I'm doing this expiriment in the Yuugiou fandom for more details about it, please go here
, but back to the point; I'm trying to write badfic, horrible badfic. I'm thinking I'm doing something wrong because I'm not getting of the "OMG!THIS SUX!" or the "OMG! MARYSUE" yet. *sigh*
Here's the link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2879175/2/
I will be hoping for some feedback on how to make it more badfic-like.
Thank you all!